writing sample

Start Writing Here:  It  was  very  hard    and   i  was  really   scared  when  it   was   my  turn     i   couldn't   see  a  thing  there   was  just   black   i   bumped   into   some   people      then    i  

went   on  the  slide    with   skye   after  that  it   was  skye’s   turn    and  she  bumped   into   tupia   after   we  went  on  the   flying  fox.                                  

We  did  it   at  the   park    it  was   fun   and   scary.

What  we  did   is  that  it   was  kind   of   like  a  game   i  enjoyed   my  self.

After  all  of   that  time  we  went  back  to  class  and  talked  about   it   was    cool  awesome    and   hard.  we   over   the  bridge    and  on   the   poles    and      ladders    also   there  was   a  blue    taneil.